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Falkontenebrae
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A story Pt. 1

Posted by Falkontenebrae - May 9th, 2009


This a story inspired by something my father once told me. NOW with edited-ness.

Once there was a Warrior. He was the strongest in all the land, and the Emperor's best soldier and friend. For a time, he defended the land from evil.
After a while, the Warrior lost the drive to fight, and he settled down with a beautiful woman, and had a son. And they were happy for a time.
On a day in the child's fifth year of life, the Warrior went out hunting. It was then that an evil Wizard kidnapped his family. The Wizard's minions had been slain by the Warrior in the past, and he was out for revenge. When the Warrior discovered his missing family, he fell into a desperate rage, ravaging everything in search of them.
During this search, he found the Wizard, in the form of someone he trusted. He asked the Wizard if he knew what became of the Warrior's family. The Wizard pointed in the direction of a cave nearby, one that held a mysterious gate. The Wizard said that the kidnapper threw the Warrior's family into the gate, into a land of utter chaos. Immediately the Warrior set into the cave, and through the gate.
It was in that land that he met a dragon. The Warrior asked the dragon if he had seen a human woman and child in all this chaos. When the dragon, none of which can tell a lie, said that no woman and child had been here in 100 years, the Warrior realized he'd been tricked...


Comments

i think you messed up some parts but overall that was a pretty awesome story, good job!

And this will be continued. I actually have three versions in my head, too.Thanks for the notice though, I'll have to edit those out